Tuesday 10 July 2012

Big Hosen


Smashing the
plentiverse of ideas
shaking thought into truth
carefully unfolding the doubt
of humanity


Leaving black planets
alone to ponder
their own magnificence
and splendor
brave but misunderstood


A great undoing of the doing
shadows cast by ego,
self-aggrandisement
truth is victory!
rang the Universe


Particles of soup erupting from
the pit of nothingness
revealing the secret
that never was
since time began.



All verses copyright Suzy R 2012



6 comments:

  1. very interesting development in this...esp. loved the second stanza with the Leaving black planets Alone to ponder...and then the undoing of the doing...bringing it back to the core again...

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    1. Thank you so much for your comments Claudia; I find this whole subject fascinating and tried to strip the complexity back using simple words..

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  2. The Big Bang has its poetry beyond science! So love the image of "particles of soup".

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    1. Indeed, there are endless thoughts and words behind creation! Take care Gemma :)

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  3. nice...i love that stanza on the great undoing of doing....and where you go with that stanza....tight little piece...

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    1. Big cheers, Brian. Always good to hear from you :)

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