Smashing
the
plentiverse
of ideas
shaking
thought into truth
carefully
unfolding the doubt
of
humanity
Leaving
black planets
alone
to ponder
their
own magnificence
and
brave but misunderstood
brave but misunderstood
A
great undoing of the doing
shadows
cast by ego,
self-aggrandisement
truth
is victory!
rang
the Universe
Particles
of soup erupting from
the
pit of nothingness
revealing
the secret
that never was
since
time began.
All verses copyright Suzy R 2012
very interesting development in this...esp. loved the second stanza with the Leaving black planets Alone to ponder...and then the undoing of the doing...bringing it back to the core again...
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comments Claudia; I find this whole subject fascinating and tried to strip the complexity back using simple words..
DeleteThe Big Bang has its poetry beyond science! So love the image of "particles of soup".
ReplyDeleteIndeed, there are endless thoughts and words behind creation! Take care Gemma :)
Deletenice...i love that stanza on the great undoing of doing....and where you go with that stanza....tight little piece...
ReplyDeleteBig cheers, Brian. Always good to hear from you :)
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